Wednesday, June 21, 2017
I’ve enjoyed doing the Hip Hop routine because it is fun and interesting to learn.
I’ve been challenged by holding a girls hand in Cha cha.
I learnt to do the strut, mexicon wave, the double jump and the punch and from the Cha cha the new York, the train, the basic step and the backwards new York.
Thursday, June 8, 2017
Moment in Time Writing Term 2 Week 3
WALT write "a moment in time" writing.
Specific goals (Please highlight yours)
- I can support my ideas with detail (Ideas)
- I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic (Vocabulary)
- I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure & Language)
- About to Hatch (Add 3 sentences for each sense)
I can see: the egg cracking slowly.
I can see: the waves rolling in and out.
I can hear: the tide coming in and out.
I can hear the rock cracking slowly.
I can smell: the salty water getting closer and going away.
I can feel: the rough surface on the egg.
I can taste: the salty air going into my mouth
Write your “moment in time” writing here using this format:
As I walk across the beach I see lots of rocky meteors coming from space. Boom! Bang! I run away, trying not to get hit by the meteors.
I can see a big crack in the rock, I think it is a dinosaur. When I look across the beach I can see the waves rolling in and out. When I look back at the rock I see lots of gel-like slime.
I can hear the tide coming in and out. When I look at the rock again, I can hear the rock cracking slowly. I can hear the strong wind blowing the sand.
I can smell the stinky slime coming from the rock. I can smell the salty sea air. I can smell lots of fish and wavy seaweed.
I can feel the strong wind blowing on me. can feel the rough surface on the rock. I can feel the wind blowing sand in my face.
I can taste the salty sand when I breath in and out. I can taste tiny pebbles in my mouth as the rock cracks. I can taste the salty water hanging in the air.
As I look across the sea and back at the rock. BOOM! The rock explodes and out comes a DINOSAUR!
Tuesday, June 6, 2017
My Mother And Stan 2007:3:3 (Week 5, 29 May - 2 June)
WALT use grammatically correct structures.
- Complete this main idea chart.
Read the text and record key words/phrases that answer these questions:
Who? Stan and Mother
What? Her computer had a virus.
Where? At home.
When? Monday morning
Why? Because her had to write books.
How? Stan fixed
Summarise the text in 25 words:
Complete the 2 ( or more that have been set for you) grammar activities on Quill.org. Details of login are on this image. Login with your school google email and password.
Wednesday, May 31, 2017
WALT:I can use a text structure that is appropriate to the purpose.
The jealous Griffin
Once upon a time there lived a Griffin in the jungle. One day Lion and Elephant got new devices for BYOD to school. When the 9:00 bell rang for school Mr Owl said “come in class”. Griffin got a little bit jealous about It because he didn’t have one. So when everyone went out for lunch time Griffin quickly took the two devices and hid them in his desk. When lion and elephant went to the cupboard to get their devices they were not there. So they went home and told their parents that they lost their devices. The next morning Hippopotamus brought her new bike to school . She asked Griffin “do you like my bike?”. So when hippo went outside for lunch Griffin quickly went to the bike stand and hid hippo’s bike in a bush. When the school bell rang hippo went to get her bike but it wasn’t there. So hippo went home and told her parents that her bike was lost. The next morning Lion’s, Elephant’s and Hippo’s parents came and told the principal that Lion and Elephants devices and Hippo’s bike were stolen. Griffin saw that her friends parents were talking about where their things were. So Griffin came into the office and said it was me I hid your stuff. The principal asked where did you hide their things. So Griffin took them to Lion and Elephants devices. After that Griffin took them to where he had hidden the bike. Then Griffin forgot which bush had the bike, so Hippo guessed which bush and she got it right. Then the principal said “why did you steal their things” “because I was jealous” “I am really sorry can you forgive me guys” . They said “yes”. So when someone got a cool thing Griffin never stole a thing again.
Friday, May 12, 2017
WALT write a “moment in time” piece of writing.
I can see:
A magic mirror that swirls in spirels.
I can hear:
A vibrating sound
I can smell:
Nothing because my nose is blocked from sneezing after breathing in all the dust.
I can smell lots of dust .
I can feel:
I can touch slimy gel
I can feel gel like water.
I can taste:
Particles of fluffy dust in my mouth
Fluffy dust that is yuck
Sarah kneels carefully in front of the mirror curious about what might happen.
She sees a magic mirror that looks like water that swirls in spirals.
She hears a vibrating sound when she touches it.
She smells lots of dust that looks like fluffy particles which does not smell good.
Sarah tastes lots of tiny particles of dust that don’t taste good.
She feels slimy gel when she touches the mirror.
Sarah is the only one in her family that can see the mirror’s magical things.